Five Things That I Do Now That I Never Did Back Then

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1: I never really revised my writing but I always do it now.
2: I never really moved any of my sentences around that didn't go with the paragraph.
3: I never used different words or more specific words.
4: I didn't explain myself that much in my writing but now I do.
5:When I write at times I write the same word twice and it doesn't make sense.

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